art

[spursballer21]

http://i48.tinypic.com/1626z50.jpg
" tulips r red tulips r pink i love working with pen"different colored pens

http://i46.tinypic.com/10seiwk.jpg
"the smell of perfume" colored pencil on black paper
http://i48.tinypic.com/jigg3t.jpg"1,2,3 shoot"blue bic pen
inspired by Juan Francisco Casas


Well here is my artwork.Tell me what you think about it.I love critics.And I'm bearly learning colored pencil and color if you all can give any tips tell me I'll listen to them.O and post up your art too I wana see what you all make too.I bearly have a year and half in art and this is what I've done and I'm bearly graduating high school senior .

[thispego]

bearly

[spursballer21]

bearly
bearly what?

[mookie2001]

bare grills?, thispego gets anxiety when he sees them

[fraga]

It's cute that you watermarked them...

[marini martini]

Very nice, SB!!!:tu I can see a lot of improvement since you posted your art last time. Very creative!!!! Congratulations on winning first place on #3. I had to re-read that you did it with a blue bic pen!!! Keep up the good work!!!:toast


..............and spell "bearly", barely next time!:D


http://i928.photobucket.com/albums/ad122/peoplepainter/facepaintDSCF9231.jpg

[thispego]

kids about to graduate highschool and they cant even fuckin spell. sad sad sad state of affairs.

yeah im not down with bare grills, but i am down with bear grylls

[JMarkJohns]

I like the third image quite a bit. I used to do a lot of pen/ink art in high school, and did a lot of stippling as well. A few years ago I got into wire art. That was a lot of fun.

As for critique, it's always tough to critique abstract. I would say spend more time on facial features, as yours are very simplified and cartoonish in appearance. Maybe that's intentional. Like I said, abstract is difficult to provide insight for. You seem to have good technique and color awareness, which is the two most important aspects beyond creativity. The only other note is you have three images and three distinct styles. Try to develop one and stick with it. If you get good, often times its that look that works to promote your art.

[thispego]

art, lol

[JMarkJohns]

art, lol

Lack of imagination/poor taste, lol

[lil'mo]

you can only have imagination if you like/make art. got it.

hey i'm impressed with people who can draw a persons face with perfect detail. but abstract etc, lol. please. babies can do that shit.

[spursballer21]

bearly


Very nice, SB!!!:tu I can see a lot of improvement since you posted your art last time. Very creative!!!! Congratulations on winning first place on #3. I had to re-read that you did it with a blue bic pen!!! Keep up the good work!!!:toast


..............and spell "bearly", barely next time!:D


http://i928.photobucket.com/albums/ad122/peoplepainter/facepaintDSCF9231.jpg


Yeah, thanks thats what i was aiming for improvement.
How much better do you think i have gotten.
I think this is still the beginning of what i can and can do way better now that I have competion experience and watching other artists and most important learning from my mistakes.I think this is just the surface of my talent.

[spursballer21]

bearly


I like the third image quite a bit. I used to do a lot of pen/ink art in high school, and did a lot of stippling as well. A few years ago I got into wire art. That was a lot of fun.

As for critique, it's always tough to critique abstract. I would say spend more time on facial features, as yours are very simplified and cartoonish in appearance. Maybe that's intentional. Like I said, abstract is difficult to provide insight for. You seem to have good technique and color awareness, which is the two most important aspects beyond creativity. The only other note is you have three images and three distinct styles. Try to develop one and stick with it. If you get good, often times its that look that works to promote your art.
Thanks and its not abstract
its realism and surrealism
and well style
i dont have one
i think
im stick
with surrealism
and realism/realistic
those r the only styles that attract me

[marini martini]

Yeah, thanks thats what i was aiming for improvement.
How much better do you think i have gotten.
I think this is still the beginning of what i can and can do way better now that I have competion experience and watching other artists and most important learning from my mistakes.I think this is just the surface of my talent.

I think you have gotten a lot better. I can tell that you are a lot freer in your work, it looks to be that you are producing with more confidence and ease. Keep learning and familiarize your self with other artists' work as often as you can. In art there are never bad mistakes, only creative adjustments. :toast

[JMarkJohns]

you can only have imagination if you like/make art. got it.

Don't be so sensitive that you take offense to me being an ass to someone else being an ass.

[spursballer21]

I think you have gotten a lot better. I can tell that you are a lot freer in your work, it looks to be that you are producing with more confidence and ease. Keep learning and familiarize your self with other artists' work as often as you can. In art there are never bad mistakes, only creative adjustments. :toast
thanks and why more free?xD sorry again
thast what im aiming
for up up up and never lower
if u only knew my next ideas
they make this work
look like shit
xD
o well
im my worst critic
i love hearing
and know what other ppl thing of my progress and art
yeah i know there aint mistakes just creative adjustments
its a slow process
but hey
im getting there
i think i can show this world lots
im confident i could draw anything
excepts humans yet
its hard
to there shape
and realism
at the level i want
but ill get with practice

[Stringer_Bell]

brah, not bad looks promising, but you'd get better feedback if your replies weren't posted as fucking poems that don't rhyme. kthanxbye

[lil'mo]

Don't be so sensitive that you take offense to me being an ass to someone else being an ass.

sorry, you're just so imaginative, liking art and all :LOL

[lil'mo]

thanks and why more free?xD sorry again
thast what im aiming
for up up up and never lower
if u only knew my next ideas
they make this work
look like shit
xD
o well
im my worst critic
i love hearing
and know what other ppl thing of my progress and art
yeah i know there aint mistakes just creative adjustments
its a slow process
but hey
im getting there
i think i can show this world lots
im confident i could draw anything
excepts humans yet
its hard
to there shape
and realism
at the level i want
but ill get with practice

lol, omg :lol

[mouse]

Nice work you should enter this .........................

http://moca.virtual.museum/festival10/contestpages/contestindex.htm

[Mavs_man_41]

lil mo's extreme faggotry is considered a work of art to some

[David Bowie]

you can only have imagination if you like/make art. got it.

hey i'm impressed with people who can draw a persons face with perfect detail. but abstract etc, lol. please. babies can do that shit.


That's bs. There is some really amazing abstract work out there. And you can always tell if somebody has talent or not just by looking at a few brush strokes.

[mouse]

That's bs. There is some really amazing abstract work out there. And you can always tell if somebody has talent or not just by looking at a few brush strokes.


mark Allen 1998
http://i125.photobucket.com/albums/p55/RackTheMouse/Donated%20art%20for%20free1/th_mark-allen-1.jpg (http://s125.photobucket.com/albums/p55/RackTheMouse/Donated%20art%20for%20free1/?action=view&current=mark-allen-1.jpg)

[spursballer21]

That's bs. There is some really amazing abstract work out there. And you can always tell if somebody has talent or not just by looking at a few brush strokes.
so u think i have talent or no?



Nice work you should enter this .........................

http://moca.virtual.museum/festival10/contestpages/contestindex.htm
well i really cant
its digital art
this is media art

and who cares if i write like that
its juts a forum

[mouse]

so u think i have talent or no?
well i really cant
its digital art
this is media art




Go to the main page they have free galleries and contest for all art, photography, and any images you can create with brush,pencil,charcoal,markers,chalk,ink,camera, or computer.

http://moca.virtual.museum/



AutoGallery
Open Gallery
Photo-based
Drawn/Painted
Guest Gallery
3d Rendered
Surreal
Algorithmic/Fractal
New Media/Video

[lil'mo]

That's bs. There is some really amazing abstract work out there. And you can always tell if somebody has talent or not just by looking at a few brush strokes.

yeah I can tell from your signature that you like gay shit like that. Sorry but that is just unimpressive. Anyone who sees value in it is just seeing things.

[spursballer21]

Go to the main page they have free galleries and contest for all art, photography, and any images you can create with brush,pencil,charcoal,markers,chalk,ink,camera, or computer.

http://moca.virtual.museum/



AutoGallery
Open Gallery
Photo-based
Drawn/Painted
Guest Gallery
3d Rendered
Surreal
Algorithmic/Fractal
New Media/Video

how much does it cost?
is it competion or what?
and if u win what do u get
just tell me all the basic info thanks

[mouse]

how much does it cost?
is it competion or what?
and if u win what do u get
just tell me all the basic info thanks



Get rid of the cheesy watermarks, I may be able to show you.

[mouse]

http://i125.photobucket.com/albums/p55/RackTheMouse/Donated%20art%20for%20free1/th_111.jpg (http://s125.photobucket.com/albums/p55/RackTheMouse/Donated%20art%20for%20free1/?action=view&current=111.jpg)

[Booharv]

yeah I can tell from your signature that you like gay shit like that. Sorry but that is just unimpressive. Anyone who sees value in it is just seeing things.


http://www.spurstalk.com/forums/image.php?u=1318&dateline=1180814022&type=profile

thispego is the faggot with glasses.

[spursballer21]

Get rid of the cheesy watermarks, I may be able to show you.

just tell me

[Shastafarian]

http://www.spurstalk.com/forums/image.php?u=1318&dateline=1180814022&type=profile

"I'm baaaaaaaaaaaaaaack"

[spursballer21]

so anybody what that website is for exactly and what i can do to understand color

[mouse]

just tell me


each contest is different. some you get cash, some you get software and art supplies, some awards are your images get displayed in a Brooklyn gallery.

The fee is for them taking your image and framing it and displaying it as the judges look at it. You get many offers to sell your image so the fee pays itself.


http://moca.virtual.museum/physical.htm

http://moca.virtual.museum/galphoto03.jpg

[spursballer21]

o i see and how is the fee around?and im guessing 1st its just a digital drawing.But if they like it I send them in the real piece.And I don't see and email where I can contact them.

[mouse]

Email the man who runs the show Don Archer

[email protected]



There are many sites and galleries having art contest make sure you Google art contest so you can get more exposure.


MOCA is just one of many. In fact there is one in los Angeles

http://www.moca.org/



Cleveland


http://www.mocacleveland.org/


Jacksonville

http://www.mocajacksonville.org/


Miami

http://www.mocanomi.org/


Don't forget if you live in San Antonio there are many local art shows.

Find one in your home town and share your talent with others.

[spursballer21]

thank you mouse for all this help
ill see which contest i can enter
im do free for now
i have no money for the ones u pay :/
and yeah ive done in my town
in high school level competion
and won 3 ribons
one 1st place
one 3rd place
one honorable mention
so u think ive gotten beter than before?
and this is only a little of what i realy can do i think

[Summers]

Haikus have three lines
5, 7, 5 syllables
last line natural

I think he's going more for an e. e. cummings homage.

[mouse]

thank you mouse for all this help
ill see which contest i can enter
im do free for now
i have no money for the ones u pay :/
and yeah ive done in my town
in high school level competion
and won 3 ribons
one 1st place
one 3rd place
one honorable mention
so u think ive gotten beter than before?
and this is only a little of what i realy can do i think

Don't do art to try and impress anyone, let it come out naturally and forget what others think. only then can you be yourself and bring out your inner talent.

[mouse]

on a side note.....................


we kinda see the nose is smelling the flowers you can cut down the odor lines a tad,

my 2 cents.......



http://i46.tinypic.com/10seiwk.jpg

[marini martini]

How da fuck do we keep talkin' to ourselves???Dis is a deep, serious, psychological problem!!!:dizzy

[mouse]

How da fuck do we keep talkin' to ourselves???Dis is a deep, serious, psychological problem!!!:dizzy

It's only a problem when you stop listening to yourself.

[spursballer21]

on a side note.....................


we kinda see the nose is smelling the flowers you can cut down the odor lines a tad,

my 2 cents.......



http://i46.tinypic.com/10seiwk.jpg
yeah ill do that sorry xD
my teacher to do do something to remind of smell/aroma a patern
and she didnt tell how exactly
she just told me do it
and i think i got it
its weird how i did it


Don't do art to try and impress anyone, let it come out naturally and forget what others think. only then can you be yourself and bring out your inner talent.
yeah i dont try impressing anyone
its for my own
and my own
i mean
i like critics
and everything
but only i know
when ill be satisfied with my own artwork
im my own worst critic xD
i just want to take further further and further as much as i can
try different styles too

[mouse]

make me something tonight on your computer............if i like it I will give 25.00 dollars and 12 dollars for shipping.

I got offers for 150-300 for this.

http://moca.virtual.museum/festival10/imagesonline/image035.jpg

Sell your shit, feel good inside, that is what art is to you?

[spursballer21]

make me something tonight on your computer............if i like it I will give 25.00 dollars and 12 dollars for shipping.

I got offers for 150-300 for this.

http://moca.virtual.museum/festival10/imagesonline/image035.jpg

Sell your shit, feel good inside, that is what art is to you?
i told u
its not about money
its about passion
what i like
and what i wana show the world
and always takes patience
and love

[mouse]

Send this in........


http://i125.photobucket.com/albums/p55/RackTheMouse/Donated%20art%20for%20free1/th_send-it-in.jpg (http://s125.photobucket.com/albums/p55/RackTheMouse/Donated%20art%20for%20free1/?action=view&current=send-it-in.jpg)

[mouse]

i told u
its not about money
its about passion
what i like
and what i wana show the world
and always takes patience
and love

sorry I suck at poems.

[spursballer21]

Send this in........


http://i125.photobucket.com/albums/p55/RackTheMouse/Donated%20art%20for%20free1/th_send-it-in.jpg (http://s125.photobucket.com/albums/p55/RackTheMouse/Donated%20art%20for%20free1/?action=view&current=send-it-in.jpg)nooooooooo

[mouse]

ok smoke one and send this in..........


http://i125.photobucket.com/albums/p55/RackTheMouse/Donated%20art%20for%20free1/qq.jpg

[spursballer21]

nope sorry

[mouse]

sorry just trying to stimulate your (closed) mind............


http://i125.photobucket.com/albums/p55/RackTheMouse/Donated%20art%20for%20free1/th_stone.jpg (http://s125.photobucket.com/albums/p55/RackTheMouse/Donated%20art%20for%20free1/?action=view&current=stone.jpg)


so much for "I can handle criticism"...........:lmao

[spursballer21]

that is not critism

[thispego]

He's asking for critism, mouse, not criticism.