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Monostradamus
07-30-2011, 05:00 PM
tbh let me know if you think this sounds good at all.

It's the coming of age tale of a young Texas fisherman named Jose Patmike. He's a prodigy at bass fishing, but the death of his mother causes him to go into a tailspin. He ends up addicted to crack cocaine, sucking dick for money. Until one day a professor at UT-Austin (hopefully played by Robin Williams), finds young Jose and mentors him. He cleans up and competes and wins a fishing tournament, becoming the best pro bass fisher in the world.
BlackSwordsMan
07-30-2011, 05:39 PM
Can I play Mario the attractive mexican friend who tries to soothe Bob with the gift of sodomy?
Monostradamus
07-30-2011, 05:42 PM
You just threatened my mother, motherfucker. Wait till the homies see this. I'm fuckin your shit up Nick.

your real name is Bob?
Nathan89
07-30-2011, 06:54 PM
Can we get a sample of your new version of Good Will Hunting?
Viva Las Espuelas
07-31-2011, 01:26 AM
Needs more racism, tbqh immhfo
marini martini
07-31-2011, 02:13 AM
tbh let me know if you think this sounds good at all.

It's the coming of age tale of a young Texas fisherman named Jose Patmike. He's a prodigy at bass fishing, but the death of his mother causes him to go into a tailspin. He ends up addicted to crack cocaine, sucking dick for money. Until one day a professor at UT-Austin (hopefully played by Robin Williams), finds young Jose and mentors him. He cleans up and competes and wins a fishing tournament, becoming the best pro bass fisher in the world.

Sounds like Pego's life story!!!
DMC
07-31-2011, 11:54 AM
Sounds like Mike Iaconelli's life story minus the UT part.
thispego
07-31-2011, 12:53 PM
Sounds like Pego's life story!!!

:cry
GoodOdor
07-31-2011, 01:54 PM
Tbh didn't know his mom died, that explain while he is such a bitter loser tbh. Losing a mom at a young age could do that to a person imo.

















































lol no mother.
lol omar lining up at her grave.
BlackSwordsMan
07-31-2011, 02:54 PM
omar?
wannabe Moderator
07-31-2011, 04:32 PM
After your script is complete have this man pitch it for you.

Xw47_v1LtDs
redzero
07-31-2011, 04:41 PM
After your script is complete have this man pitch it for you.

Xw47_v1LtDs

Kill yourself, mouse.
mouse
07-31-2011, 04:50 PM
Kill yourself, mouse.


Why so you can get an epic Tat from Koriwhat before me?
Fuck you! you can wait in line like everyone else bioch.

How about this..........a live smack off loser leaves ST?


Bueller.....Bueller...


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Monostradamus
07-31-2011, 04:51 PM
tbh it is kinda funny that all these guys who hate mouse never accept his smack-off challenge. if you want to get rid of mouse then put your money where your mouth is and accept his challenge.

they're scared imho.
mouse
07-31-2011, 05:01 PM
45% of the mouse haters are underachievers the other 45% are underachievers with small cocks.

That leaves 10% tone deaf low IQ muther fuckers who don't get it.

:lmao

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mouse
07-31-2011, 11:44 PM
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mouse
07-31-2011, 11:45 PM
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mouse
07-31-2011, 11:56 PM
Back on topic......when your script is complete have it copyrighted and then looked at.
http://www.copyright.gov/

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http://moviescriptcontest.com/
http://www.gsiff.com/?gclid=CKqp1LSlraoCFQoJ2godb0NYUw

http://www.hollywoodscriptexpress.com/screenplay_contests.html

http://phillbarron.wordpress.com/2011/07/22/circalit-short-scriptfilm-competition/

http://www.facebook.com/group.php?gid=117647458268322
http://producemyfilm.org/Contests/Script/Dec2011/Default.aspx

http://rochestermoviemakers.org/scriptapalooza/