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Avante
01-08-2013, 02:30 AM
I realize this will end up kneedeep in shit but here goes.

Beat me, if ya can. The topic...Love or Hate, your choice.


"Sid"

I loved her at first sight
she had that walk
had that talk
everything was tight

her name was Rose
tall and thin
had all her teeth
and a dimple in her chin

she said she loved me
but that was a lie
because when I called her
the phone was answered by a guy

she broke my heart
tore it in two
that's why I cry
look so blue

now she lives in Texas
has a kid
little did I know
that guy was my brother Sid

Love this tune.


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People forget old Kenny started off as a rocker.

AussieFanKurt
01-08-2013, 03:00 AM
Learned about poetry in school, never really appealed to me. I understand it takes skill but meh.

Avante
01-08-2013, 03:26 AM
Learned about poetry in school, never really appealed to me. I understand it takes skill but meh.

It's kinda like dancing, you might know the steps but without the rhythm.

Let's take that picture of yours.

"Slick"

I'm so cool
yes I am
got my shades on
my black hat
I'm a bad bad man

I 'm a gambler
both day and night
roll them bones
drink my whiskey
that ain't right

got a gold watch
a straight razor too
mess with me
I'll cut ya in two

I'm Slick
a man among men
hung like a mule
saddle up to win

Avante
01-08-2013, 03:31 PM
Where's the talent here? No artists, no poets....sheesh~~~~~~~~~~~~

Fuck it lets talk movies and diet.

Departed what a great cast. Don't need no stinkin' diet.