Hey Avante

[Huey Freeman]

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[Avante]

"The Dot"

I saw it first
from way back here
a little black dot
and that was clear

it just layed there
lost and alone
a little black dot
without a home

I begin to feel sorry
begin to weep and moan
a little black dot
lost and alone

so I picked it up
patted it on the head
my own little black dot
I think I'll name it.....Fred

[RD2191]

:lol

[cantthinkofanything]

"The Dot"

I saw it first
from way back here
a little black dot
and that was clear

it just layed there
lost and alone
a little black dot
without a home

I begin to feel sorry
begin to weep and moan
a little black dot
lost and alone

so I picked it up
patted it on the head
my own little black dot
I think I'll name it.....Fred


Quality

[Franklin]

It takes a world of imagination to write a poem out of a "dot" imho, awesome work by my friend Avante, dude's one or two levels above me as a poet tbh.

[xmas1997]

"The Dot"

I saw it first
from way back here
a little black dot
and that was clear

it just layed there
lost and alone
a little black dot
without a home

I begin to feel sorry
begin to weep and moan
a little black dot
lost and alone

so I picked it up
patted it on the head
my own little black dot
I think I'll name it.....Fred

Excellent.

[Avante]

Ah shucks guys:toast