"Destiny"

[Avante]

I climbed out of
that old Greyhound
in some little
run down town

I'd gone as far
as I could go
yep, I was busted
totally out of dough

so there I stood
my suitcase in my hand
looking like what I was
a lost and lonely man

then she pulled up
in a long black Cadillac
she smiled
so I had to grin
then she said
hop on in

so I tossed my suitcase
in the backseat
then she said
you need a drink
something to eat

so we headed
to her place
it was over a few hills
as we listened to the stereo
it was some vintage Bob Wills

she lived in a trailor
had a big black cat
now I'm thinking
where in the hell
am I at

the next morning
I unpacked my suitcase
put my things away
she'd made it very clear
I was there to stay

if there is a morale
to this little story
I guess it must be
sometimes it's better
not to know
your destiny

[Franklin]

:tu

[bobcatfan4life]

gay

[Avante]

gay

"Gay"

bobcat was little
around 5 foot 3
he had a tiny dick
and was as gay
as could be

he liked to hang
in alleys and
dead end streets
places where perverts
and freaks liked to meet

bobcat sucked anyone he could
uptown
downtown
over in the hood

it didn't matter to him
if they were short
fat tall or thin

a real cock sucker
down on his knees
that was our bobcat
always looking to please

[bobcatfan4life]

:lol Didn't mean to hurt your feelings Avante, was just being an honest critic.

[Avante]

:lol Didn't mean to hurt your feelings Avante, was just being an honest critic.

A guy ending up with a strange lady.......is gay?

[RD2191]

Thought this was about the new kick ass video game coming out. :lol

[Strange Love]

Thought this was about the new kick ass video game coming out. :lol

Word. :lmao


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cdEQmpVIE4A

[RD2191]

Word. :lmao


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cdEQmpVIE4A
:lol

[Avante]

Thought this was about the new kick ass video game coming out. :lol

"Video Game"

there we sat
paddle in hand
I was winning
I'm a bad bad man

I'd scored a hit
I knew how to play
my buddy just sat there
what could he say

I broke the record
most hits in a game
I should be in the
video game
Hall of Fame

[RD2191]

"Video Game"

there we sat
paddle in hand
I was winning
I'm a bad bad man

I'd scored a hit
I knew how to play
my buddy just sat there
what could he say

I broke the record
most hits in a game
I should be in the
video game
Hall of Fame
:lolNot bad.

[DJR210]

:lol "paddle"
:lol old bastard

[cantthinkofanything]

A guy ending up with a strange lady.......is gay?

If the strange lady has a penis and fucks the guy in the ass...yes, it's pretty gay

[Avante]

If the strange lady has a penis and fucks the guy in the ass...yes, it's pretty gay

"Strange Lady"

she was tall
about 7 feet two
had long blonde hair
eyes were blue

she was a strange lady
this was well known
when she wasn't drinkin' whiskey
she was talking on the phone

I met her at a bar
a little shit kicker place
I was dressed in leather
she was wearing lace

we ended up
in the back seat of my car
back there with an amp
and my old guitar

at 7 feet two
it wasn't easy
actually it was
hard to do

but we got her done
and she was great
if I can come up with some money
I might ask her for a date

[bigzak25]

Its density mcfly.

[DMC]

"Strange Lady"

she wasn't very tall
about 4 feet two
had long black hair
legs black and blue

she was a young lady
this was well known
when she wasn't sucking off sailors
she was still living at home

I met her at a bar
a little hole in the wall
I was dressed in Cracker Jacks
She was carrying her doll

we ended up
in the back of the room
If she'd never been molested
She would be soon

That tiny face
Staring at mine
Screaming foreign dialect
Made me hard as a pine

And as I finished
I cried in her arms
She cried too
Because I had just raped her

[Avante]

"DMC'

he lived in a trailor
out in the sticks
had an old bulldog
just full of ticks

he had no friends
other than that bulldog
a turkey
and a few hens

he was sorta backward
as all could see
would wear a t-shirt
that read
I'M DMC

he was a cherry boy
some said he was gay
but it really didn't matter
he liked it that way

the boy liked to
bother Avante
that's how he got his nut
yep, acting stupid
while sitting on his butt

[RD2191]

"DMC'

he lived in a trailor
out in the sticks
had an old bulldog
just full of ticks

he had no friends
other than that bulldog
a turkey
and a few hens

he was sorta backward
as all could see
would wear a t-shirt
that read
DMC

he was a cherry boy
some said he was gay
but it really didn't matter
he liked it that way

the boy liked to
bother Avante
that's how he got his nut
yep, acting stupid
while sitting on his butt
:lmao:lmao

[Franklin]

Hey Avante, rate my latest poem please...

http://www.spurstalk.com/forums/showthread.php?t=238216&p=7545469#post7545469

[Avante]

Hey Avante, rate my latest poem please...

http://www.spurstalk.com/forums/showthread.php?t=238216&p=7545469#post7545469

Personally I'm not a fan of the dual verse, just say it once. Other than that....B.

Go back and look at that solid A poem of yours, that first one. You seem to be getting a little too...ah...mushy?

[Franklin]

Personally I'm not a fan of the dual verse, just say it once. Other than that....B.

Go back and look at that solid A poem of yours, that first one. You seem to be getting a little too...ah...mushy?
thanks for your advice, bro :toast

I derived the poem from the lyric of a Scarlett song (Innocent when you dream). It may sound fine but it did look redundant for a poem, I'm gonna edit it. Thank you again for your excellent advice.

[Avante]

thanks for your advice, bro :toast

I derived the poem from the lyric of a Scarlett song (Innocent when you dream). It may sound fine but it did look redundant for a poem, I'm gonna edit it. Thank you again for your excellent advice.

:toast

[benefactor]

"Old Faggot"

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[cantthinkofanything]

Underage Gook Tranny Whore With A Dick

Philippine bar, I was having a drink
All around, were underage chinks
They were all very pretty, but all dressed like whores
It made me quite sad so I drank a bunch more

Through the front door walked this fat GI man
Fly was unzipped, had cash in his hand
Drunk as a skunk, old Cooter Brown
Asking the teens if they liked to go down

I was about to serve him one mean dragon kick
But then he approached a gook with a prick
I held back my kick and decided to watch
As this fat drunk GI rubbed the tranny thing's crotch

The GI slobbered and panted and came
The tranny smiled and then did the same
"you give me money and I say no crime
I'm only 14 but me love you long time"

I must admit, I did not interfere
I sat and laughed and drank some more beer
They were quite the couple this GI was sick
with the underage gook tranny whore with a dick

[Blake]

I climbed out of
that old Greyhound
in some little
run down town

I'd gone as far
as I could go
yep, I was busted
totally out of dough

so there I stood
my suitcase in my hand
looking like what I was
a lost and lonely man

then she pulled up
in a long black Cadillac
she smiled
so I had to grin
then she said
hop on in

so I tossed my suitcase
in the backseat
then she said
you need a drink
something to eat

so we headed
to her place
it was over a few hills
as we listened to the stereo
it was some vintage Bob Wills

she lived in a trailor
had a big black cat
now I'm thinking
where in the hell
am I at

the next morning
I unpacked my suitcase
put my things away
she'd made it very clear
I was there to stay

if there is a morale
to this little story
I guess it must be
sometimes it's better
not to know
your destiny

Is this how you met Judy

[The Reckoning]

http://i.imgur.com/irJ4248.png

[Blake]

I was dressed in leather

You wear leather




if I can come up with some money
I might ask her for a date

I notice you are always broke in your poems

Write about what you know I guess.

[Avante]

"Old Faggot"

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"Avante"

standing six foot two
and two seventy five
he just might be
the coolest man
alive

he can do it all
sing them blues
write poetry
talk track
talk football

then ya have
those sexy eyes
washboard abs
thunder thighs

a man among boys
a legend in his own time
that's Avante
the man is so
fine

[Avante]

Underage Gook Tranny Whore With A Dick

Philippine bar, I was having a drink
All around, were underage chinks
They were all very pretty, but all dressed like whores
It made me quite sad so I drank a bunch more

Through the front door walked this fat GI man
Fly was unzipped, had cash in his hand
Drunk as a skunk, old Cooter Brown
Asking the teens if they liked to go down

I was about to serve him one mean dragon kick
But then he approached a gook with a prick
I held back my kick and decided to watch
As this fat drunk GI rubbed the tranny thing's crotch

The GI slobbered and panted and came
The tranny smiled and then did the same
"you give me money and I say no crime
I'm only 14 but me love you long time"

I must admit, I did not interfere
I sat and laughed and drank some more beer
They were quite the couple this GI was sick
with the underage gook tranny whore with a dick

You try too hard little guy.

[Blake]

"Avante"

standing six foot two
and two seventy five


Obese

[Avante]

"Leg Humper"

he follows me around
both night and day
there he'll be
humping away

he's too stupid
far too dumb
to figure out
seeing him
is no fun

he has problems
as all can see
he has it bad
simply can't stay away
from me

I don't talk to
the boy anymore
now he's just my pet
my little whore

[cantthinkofanything]

You try too hard little guy.

No...I reread my poem and it made me laugh a little. It rhymed and the meter was good. It was worth exactly the time it took me to type it.

[Avante]

No...I reread my poem and it made me laugh a little. It rhymed and the meter was good. It was worth exactly the time it took me to type it.


Ok man give me this one...

"The Jukebox"

[cantthinkofanything]

Ok man give me this one...

"The Jukebox"

She walked in the bar and ordered a drink
I picked up the tab and started to think
This girl, she was cool, a crooked ass smile
I axed her to sit and talk for a while

The night moved on but she and I faded
This chick was not rich, but man, she was jaded
I had one more move, to capture this fox
I moonwalked myself back to the jukebox

I had no money, my cash was all gone
So I closed my eyed and summoned the Fonz
With a wink and a kick with the back of my heal
The Priest blared out loud with some hard British Steel

At that point, it's over, the hunt is all done
I reached in my coat and pulled out my gun
Her eyes got all wide, she started to scream
I blew out her brains and put on some Cream

[Avante]

She walked in the bar and ordered a drink
I picked up the tab and started to think
This girl, she was cool, a crooked ass smile
I axed her to sit and talk for a while

The night moved on but she and I faded
This chick was not rich, but man, she was jaded
I had one more move, to capture this fox
I moonwalked myself back to the jukebox

I had no money, my cash was all gone
So I closed my eyed and summoned the Fonz
With a wink and a kick with the back of my heal
The Priest blared out loud with some hard British Steel

At that point, it's over, the hunt is all done
I reached in my coat and pulled out my gun
Her eyes got all wide, she started to scream
I blew out her brains and put on some Cream

Hahahahahaha....BRAVO!!!!!!!!!!!

"The Jukebox"

I put down a buck
needed some change
they had an old jukebox
held down by some chains

it was a classic
top of the line
then she walked in
she was oh so fine

I pushed A-7
then B-3
walked over to her table
she just smiled at me

as Otis began to sing
about these arms of mine
she whispered in my ear
buy me some wine

so we shared a bottle
got up to dance
when Kool and The Gang
took off with
Jungle Romance

she was tall
cool and lean
I was getting hot
you could almost
see the steam

once back at our table
I said lets get out of here
she said no
I asked why
that's when she waved at the bartender
he was her guy

so I got up
feeling low down and blue
went back to the jukebox
pushed A-2

[cantthinkofanything]

Hahha....BRAVO!!!!!!!!!!!

"The Jukebox"

I put down a buck
needed some change
they had an old jukebox
held down by some chains

it was a classic
top of the line
then she walked in
she was oh so fine

I pushed A-7
then B-3
walked over to her table
she just smiled at me

as Otis began to sing
about these arms of mine
she whispered in my ear
buy me some wine

so we shared a bottle
got up to dance
when Kool and The Gang
took off with
Jungle Romance

she was tall
cool and lean
I was getting hot
you could almost
see the steam

once back at our table
I said lets get out of here
she said no
I asked why
that's when she waved at the bartender
he was her guy

so I got up
feeling low down and blue
went back to the jukebox
pushed A-2

I like it. Especially leaving "A2" open to whatever each's "go to " song is, mine is , Paralyzer