Sir Johnny I need help with a Valentine's day poem

[Chris]

Trill sits at the keyboard, his hands are afire.
To blackface his troll, that is his desire.

Solid

[RichFromLFO]

Solid

There was a good man named Paul Revere
I feel much better baby when you're near

[Avant]

"Call it a Grin"

I saw her again
those big green eyes
that dimple in her chin

and she saw me too
gave a little smile
could call it a grin

so I picked up my drink
joined her at the bar
about this time
the long hair on the bandstand
started playing his guitar

she was dry, needed another drink
so I pointed to her glass
the bartender right on the spot
gave me a little wink
which meant she was hot

we had another round
or was it two
when the long haired guitar player
appeared to be thru

he walked right over
sat right down
she smiled at me
then turned around

now I was sad
suddenly a lonely guy
then they got up and left
she never looked back
never said good bye

[lebomb]

My love for you is like Fort Knox
The heart I have is secure with a lock
After our first date, it was you and no other s
Now bend over and let me lick dat fawt box

[Trill Clinton]

My love for you is like Fort Knox
The heart I have is secure with a lock
After our first date, it was you and no other s
Now bend over and let me lick dat fawt box

LMAO

[Blake]

"Call it a Grin"

I saw her again
those big green eyes
that dimple in her chin

and she saw me too
gave a little smile
could call it a grin

so I picked up my drink
joined her at the bar
about this time
the long hair on the bandstand
started playing his guitar

she was dry, needed another drink
so I pointed to her glass
the bartender right on the spot
gave me a little wink
which meant she was hot

we had another round
or was it two
when the long haired guitar player
appeared to be thru

he walked right over
sat right down
she smiled at me
then turned around

now I was sad
suddenly a lonely guy
then they got up and left
she never looked back
never said good bye

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Lol why do you need a bartender to tell you a chick is hot? Are you blind? No mention of telling the bartender wtf for the wink

And for a supposed music expert you have a horribly bad sense of rhythm and beat.

You seriously suck at this. You should just leave.

[Avant]

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Lol why do you need a bartender to tell you a chick is hot? Are you blind? No mention of telling the bartender wtf for the wink

And for a supposed music expert you have a horribly bad sense of rhythm and beat.

You seriously suck at this. You should just leave.

Blake I have won awards for poetry, have had poems published in the local paper. Had teachers in three different college classes read my poems to the class. I know I'm good.

You are never ever going to do anything but act stupid.

Give me a topic and don't get dumb about it.

[benefactor]

Blake I have won awards for poetry, have had poems published in the local paper. Had teachers in three different college classes read my poems to the class. I know I'm good.

You are never ever going to do anything but act stupid.

Give me a topic and don't get dumb about it.

Just like you are 6'3 275, right?

[Blake]

Blake I have won awards for poetry, have had poems published in the local paper. Had teachers in three different college classes read my poems to the class. I know I'm good.

You are never ever going to do anything but act stupid.

Give me a topic and don't get dumb about it.

Lol Junior college.

Lol local newspaper

Show the awards or you're lying. Again.

[Avant]

Lol Junior college.

Lol local newspaper

Show the awards or you're lying. Again.

Why not do as you were told? Give me some realistic topic and let's see how I do, why am I so confident?