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    I am not redwood DJ Mbenga's Avatar
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    Sooo...applying to the University of Illinois, need to write an application essay, 1000 words or so.

    What should I include here? Personal experiences, what I plan on studying, etc.?

    So far I have:


    Deer Whom it may concern,

    Throughout my life, I have made many choices. None of them are as important as the one I am considering now. This choice, its pretty big. No, not what car I plan on buying, but what education I plan on getting, at your university. While for some people, this choice is an easy one to make. For me it is not.

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    What should I add to this? Should I write about a personal story, etc.? One that shows character, and how I'll be a good addition to the university?
    you probably need a legit hook. its supposed to make your stand out from 30 k other applications. find an english expert and have them grammar that up.

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    I feel bad if you're not actually trolling for my last comment but I can't help myself if I feel like Manny Ramirez when I see a hanging curve like that.
    LOL, his post that you quoted alone shouts troll, as well as the majority of his earlier posts.


    Its either English or History, and I'm not very good at History.
    What exactly does being good at history mean???

    Being "good at history" = Being interested in history, knowing how to read, and having some type of memory capacity.

    and by the other posts, we can make more connections that this is a troll because he's clearly not good at English.

    Either a troll or someone with very unrealistic ambitions...

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    Wow, if this is a troll attempt, The poster has definitely exceeded at it.


    If only their was a Bachelor of Arts in Trolling degree.

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    I am not redwood DJ Mbenga's Avatar
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    Its either English or History, and I'm not very good at History.
    history isnt memorization so if thats what you are bad at dont be concerned. you just have to be able to read a lot of in a short ammount of time. of course life gets easier when somebody reveals to you can "gut a book". then its about discussion and articulating those ideas verbally and through critical writing assignments. facts and trivia dont get it done.

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    history isnt memorization so if thats what you are bad at dont be concerned. you just have to be able to read a lot of in a short ammount of time. of course life gets easier when somebody reveals to you can "gut a book". then its about discussion and articulating those ideas verbally and through critical writing assignments. facts and trivia dont get it done.
    Are you a history major? If so, would u mind PM'ing me? What sorts of jobs can one get with a history major?

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    You do not need to tell the reader what you are doing; just do it. Say what you want to convey in a direct manner.

    The anecdote should be very brief, and what you have learned from it should be the main focus. You can tell the story in a line or two, but then explain WHY it is significant to you; HOW it impacted you; WHAT you gained from it.

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    You have to be ing kidding me. When I was contemplating transferring to A&M and following their degree plan I had to take a technical writing course. I can't believe this isn't a requirement for all engineering students (I wasn't an engineering student but the fields have the same obvious need for people to communicate quickly and efficiently)

    "LOL The length of the retaining wall must be 32 feet OMG"

    Jesus. We're a country of ing idiots. If the engineers can't even be counted on to be intelligent I have no faith.
    Oh you think this is bad, I will tell you where it comes from. About two years ago, my stepdaughter told me about these assignments that her science teacher was having her class do. It was homework and he had set up a blog which conveyed each weekly assignment. They do the assignment in MS Word, then upload the do ent to the blog, etc. I was very excited as I thought that this was a good way to engage students in learning how to use the computer, the efficiencies involved in remote collaboration, etc. Anyway, she did her first assignment and asked me to look it over and I got on her case because she had all sorts of words without the vowels, sentence fragments, and other various errors. I told her about these errors and she got very defiant and told me it was texting language. I told her that although I know she believes that this is an actual new language that the time and place for it is with her friends if at all. I further explained that it has absolutely no place in academic writing. Then she dropped the bombs , "my science teacher told me we could use texting language for our assignments." I actually verbally said "no, Noooooooo" not in a pissed off way, more in a completely abhorrent tone. I immediately told her I would be calling her teacher, sending him a note, and doing anything else necessary to stop that particular instruction, but that she has to fix that right away. Then she got angry and told me "its not like its even English class, it doesn't even matter in Science." That is when I realized that I would be putting my youngest in private school when she got to school age.

    I am not going to say that my science teachers corrected every last grammatical error (it wasn't their discipline, and therefore they weren't experts), but I did get counted off for the errors that they did catch.

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    Are you a history major? If so, would u mind PM'ing me? What sorts of jobs can one get with a history major?
    ...teaching, or grad school (which then leads to more teaching). It's really, really hard to make it with a terminal history degree. My undergrad majors were history and American studies, but I also knew that I was going to go back to school anyway, so I might as well do what I enjoy. A lot of people are history majors because they want to go to law school, etc.

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    Oh you think this is bad, I will tell you where it comes from. About two years ago, my stepdaughter told me about these assignments that her science teacher was having her class do. It was homework and he had set up a blog which conveyed each weekly assignment. They do the assignment in MS Word, then upload the do ent to the blog, etc. I was very excited as I thought that this was a good way to engage students in learning how to use the computer, the efficiencies involved in remote collaboration, etc. Anyway, she did her first assignment and asked me to look it over and I got on her case because she had all sorts of words without the vowels, sentence fragments, and other various errors. I told her about these errors and she got very defiant and told me it was texting language. I told her that although I know she believes that this is an actual new language that the time and place for it is with her friends if at all. I further explained that it has absolutely no place in academic writing. Then she dropped the bombs , "my science teacher told me we could use texting language for our assignments." I actually verbally said "no, Noooooooo" not in a pissed off way, more in a completely abhorrent tone. I immediately told her I would be calling her teacher, sending him a note, and doing anything else necessary to stop that particular instruction, but that she has to fix that right away. Then she got angry and told me "its not like its even English class, it doesn't even matter in Science." That is when I realized that I would be putting my youngest in private school when she got to school age.

    I am not going to say that my science teachers corrected every last grammatical error (it wasn't their discipline, and therefore they weren't experts), but I did get counted off for the errors that they did catch.
    Probably a damn coach teaching science.

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    Sooo...applying to the University of Illinois, need to write an application essay, 1000 words or so.

    What should I include here? Personal experiences, what I plan on studying, etc.?

    So far I have:


    Deer Whom it may concern,

    Throughout my life, I have made many choices. None of them are as important as the one I am considering now. This choice, its pretty big. No, not what car I plan on buying, but what education I plan on getting, at your university. While for some people, this choice is an easy one to make. For me it is not.

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    What should I add to this? Should I write about a personal story, etc.? One that shows character, and how I'll be a good addition to the university?
    Two words:

    "Trade School"

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    We never had an explicit technical writing requirement, but every single programming project I ever did in a CS class (even the freshman stuff) required two pretty extensive manuals: one for users and one for maintainers, as well as do entation of every module, class, and public procedure. Sometimes analysis of runtimes of functions and memory usage too. Of course any non-programming project was a technical paper. Is it not standard for engineering students to do a lot of writing? I never took anything in mechanical eng. and very little in EE outside of the CS requirements, so it could be different there though.
    I wouldn't say that I had to do a lot of writing, there was enough of it to where you'd certainly hurt your GPA if you couldn't do it. Granted that was a while ago so I'm not sure what they're being taught these days. But looking at the graduates coming into the workforce today it certainly seems to me that there's not nearly the emphasis on communication, written or verbal, that I had back when I was in school. The graduates I'm seeing are great at number crunching, bad at communicating.

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    Oh you think this is bad, I will tell you where it comes from. About two years ago, my stepdaughter told me about these assignments that her science teacher was having her class do. It was homework and he had set up a blog which conveyed each weekly assignment. They do the assignment in MS Word, then upload the do ent to the blog, etc. I was very excited as I thought that this was a good way to engage students in learning how to use the computer, the efficiencies involved in remote collaboration, etc. Anyway, she did her first assignment and asked me to look it over and I got on her case because she had all sorts of words without the vowels, sentence fragments, and other various errors. I told her about these errors and she got very defiant and told me it was texting language. I told her that although I know she believes that this is an actual new language that the time and place for it is with her friends if at all. I further explained that it has absolutely no place in academic writing. Then she dropped the bombs , "my science teacher told me we could use texting language for our assignments." I actually verbally said "no, Noooooooo" not in a pissed off way, more in a completely abhorrent tone. I immediately told her I would be calling her teacher, sending him a note, and doing anything else necessary to stop that particular instruction, but that she has to fix that right away. Then she got angry and told me "its not like its even English class, it doesn't even matter in Science." That is when I realized that I would be putting my youngest in private school when she got to school age.

    I am not going to say that my science teachers corrected every last grammatical error (it wasn't their discipline, and therefore they weren't experts), but I did get counted off for the errors that they did catch.


    Was this in San Antonio? How pathetic.

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    $200 cash 4>0rings's Avatar
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    What is texting language?

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    was this in san antonio? How pathetic.
    nisd!

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    What is texting language?
    LOL, OMG WTF this guy doesn't know TXTG language. GTFOH

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