He gave you a scenario to write about.
He gave you a scenario to write about.
I guess I'm going to have to start watching TV, that's about all most of you can talk. Where is the depth?
Dude, that was on that.....as a little kid I ran a 19.5-20.5.............level, ok?
Right now, I'm watching a track meet from Oslo, guess what won the WORLD CLASS 200m...19.90.
Dude, trolling is one thing, looking like a total idiot is something else, ok?
Last edited by Avante; 06-07-2018 at 10:30 PM.
As a child I ran like the wind
End to end
and back again
sweat and shimmer on my skin
Six foot four, I'm no shorty
four second forties
banging sororities
arrest me , I'm the authority
Me and Judy side by side
enjoyed the ride
Took the bride
Got on a forum and I lied
I chose the username Razon
rhymes with Mason
He's amazin'
He popped from Judy while she was grazin'
I told the boys about Olongapo
another low
didn't know
I'd be forum branded a pedo
The truth is I was unathletic
more pathetic
it's copacetic
I prefer instead to wax poetic
Folks here now just see a fool
a forum tool
spew my drool
I basically peaked in high school
I think what people see here is a guy who has seen a lot and knows a lot, and they have a hard time relating because they are too limiterd in both experience and knowledge so they need to try and even things out by acting like you do.
And ya suck at poetry, that was sad.
You don't have to act. It comes naturally to you.
Says the fat got who registered "Razon".
That coming from a guy who....TOM SAVAGE IS THE BEST.....hahahaha~~~ Tell us all about "Struggle" who is soon to be voted the 12ish best player in the league....ok? Tell us about....he muffed the punt, hahaha.....who just got voted the 40th best player.
Little man, shut the up.....ok? You're too damn dumb to even have an opinion.
No I didn't, so why lie?
Translation
Avante kicking my little dumbass yet again, yep, he's right I'm stupid. So I need to play this stupid , it's all I can do. I need to stay on my level.
This really is so unfair, hahahaha~~~~~~~~~~~![]()
Poor little guy, and he doesn't even see it, hahahaha~~~~~~~~~~~~~
You could have just said that you suck at poetry instead of getting so angry tbh.
You actually read what others type?
I've had poems winning contests, published in papers, read to creative writing classes. I know I'm talented as does everyone else who understands poetry.
Give me a real (not stupid) fictious scenario and watch what happens.
"Cadillac"
I was feelin' weary
right down to the bone
also flat broke
and far from home
so I stuck out
a thumb
looking to hitch a ride
when an old man in a Cadillac
pulled up beside
ya don't look so good son
he said with a toothless grin
thats when I took out my knife
and cut that old from eye ball
to chin
now I own a Cadillac
cruising down HWY 99
not a care in the world
and plenty of time
Last edited by Avante; 06-09-2018 at 01:36 AM.
Awful
I’m gonna be ill.
Please be cremated with your 8 tracks and poetry.
We have a know nothing stalker, and a guy who thinks talking curves is talking track, trying to play critics, hahahahaha~~~~~~
Give Avante a fictious situation and watch the magic.
"The Stranger"
I was awaken
in the middle of the night
someone at my door
this ain't right
I ran downstairs
opened the door
someone finish this for me.
A runner of mass m begins to run on a perfect horizontal surface and rounds a turn of radius r with a speed of v. What is the acceleration of the runner?
You are so incredibly predictable.
God You are awful.
Ill finish part of it for YOU:
Avante salivates,
it’s a little girl
This is why ya bore everyone, do you honestly believe anyone but a freak like you would care about silly like that?
If ya plan on talking track talk about the athletes involved, the times being ran. A 19 year old Cuban kid just jumped 28-11 in the long jhump..THAT...is what people care about. And stuff you know nothing about.
Dude, pull your head out of your ass, ok?
fan...so if a runner of mass m....
another fan...dude, shut the up, ok?
Last edited by Avante; 06-10-2018 at 09:47 PM.
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