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Horry For 3!
09-03-2005, 12:16 AM
I wanted to post 2 of my poems that I wrote. It is mostly for the ladies as one is called "My Girl" and the other "Love". I hope you enjoy them :tu


My Girl
Look at that girl I see, she can take your heart easily
I knew she'd be mine, I could see that look in her eyes
I can't believe I'm with her now
Just look at all that happiness I have found
All the guys hate me now
Because I got the most beautiful girl around



Love
I walk among those fine lines, just so I could be by your side
I knew I crossed your mind, as I walked passed your sight
I wanted you to be with me, forever and for enternity
We finally found each other now, we'll stay in love until our life runs out

angel_luv
09-03-2005, 12:40 AM
:tu :tu

angel_luv
09-03-2005, 12:40 AM
way, way up even!

= )

atlfan25
09-03-2005, 12:41 AM
:tu :tu
-HORRY

Horry For 3!
09-03-2005, 12:49 AM
way, way up even!

= )
Thanks. :elephant

Faccia di Angelo
09-03-2005, 01:46 PM
Those are nice. Good job :) I like the "Love" one.

ObiwanGinobili
09-03-2005, 01:48 PM
:tu :tu
Good job!
the Love one is my fav also. :spin

Horry For 3!
09-04-2005, 01:34 AM
Thanks :) I'm surpised you like the Love one more because most like the My Girl one.

Horry For 3!
11-14-2005, 06:49 PM
Excellent

SpursWoman
11-14-2005, 06:51 PM
I like the Love one best, too. Nice. :) :tu

Horry For 3!
11-14-2005, 08:01 PM
Horry, if u wanted to battle, u shoulda just told me so
when i was reading em, i thought they were shit, no no no
writing those poems make u look gay
let me step in with some flows, get the f outta the way
horry for 3, you would stick to flowing if it was up to me
but who am i? a wigger who flows who has an STD
It is not a rap/flow, it a poem. The ladies like poems not flows :lol

xcoriate
11-14-2005, 08:05 PM
got emo?

Marklar MM
11-14-2005, 08:13 PM
My dog looks like a rat,
but he is cute as hell.
He likes to play tag,
but stands still when you yell.
He waits until your close,
and then runs like shat.
But when you catch and hold 'em,
he is the best dog in this land.

:) for you my love dog.

HoopStar
11-14-2005, 09:20 PM
Horry for 3 - The poems are great and you are very talented. But they sound like something Tony would write about Eva. Good Job!

SpursWoman
11-14-2005, 09:33 PM
The ladies like poems not flows :lol


Yes, we get enough flows to last a life time. Or a least a good 30 years....so no, no flows. :spin

Horry For 3!
11-14-2005, 10:00 PM
Yes, we get enough flows to last a life time. Or a least a good 30 years....so no, no flows. :spin
:lmao flows have to suck....

midgetonadonkey
11-14-2005, 10:15 PM
:jack

batman2883
11-15-2005, 09:45 AM
Horry Is A Pussy You Have To Realize That Besides He Can't Flow For Shit, He Likes To Think He Can,

SpursWoman
11-15-2005, 09:55 AM
no more poem pussy shit man. man the fuck up


How is writing things that will get you pussy being a pussy? I thought that was you guys' main objective?


:wtf :lol

batman2883
11-15-2005, 09:58 AM
I'm sorry but what horry wrote??? wouldnt get fucking brad pitt pussy, girls would laugh at suck flotter....thats not poetry its like a 3rd grader rambling

SpursWoman
11-15-2005, 10:02 AM
Well, if you think that sucks...why don't you write something better? You know, show him how it's done.... :)

batman2883
11-15-2005, 10:15 AM
men journey far to seek true love,
i'm glad i know its true,
that i finally found you spurfect
my heart goes all to you,
for no other girl can take the place
of whom i love so true,
or that smile on your face that turns my grey sky's blue
your warm embrace is all i need to get me through my day,
and the tenderness of each great kiss is hard to turn away.

Jimcs50
11-15-2005, 10:32 AM
men journey far to seek true love,
i'm glad i know its true,
that i finally found you spurfect
my heart goes all to you,
for no other girl can take the place
of whom i love so true,
or that smile on your face that turns my grey sky's blue
your warm embrace is all i need to get me through my day,
and the tenderness of each great kiss is hard to turn away.

*coughing with hand over mouth "plagiarism" *

batman2883
11-15-2005, 10:33 AM
no its not copied from anything i put that on my sons life, i just came up with it

batman2883
11-15-2005, 10:34 AM
i just have to come up with an ending still thats not the end of it yet

katyon6th
11-15-2005, 10:36 AM
I think they're nice, Horry. :)

Tres_Till_it_MHz
11-15-2005, 12:35 PM
Sams Burger joint on Tues nights is pretty cool for open mic shit.

http://samsburgerjoint.com/calendar/calendar.php

batman2883
11-15-2005, 12:40 PM
Does Anyone Know Of A Place For Beat Poets?? I Really Really Have Been Wanting To Do Some Beat Poetry

KEDA
11-15-2005, 12:51 PM
there once was a girl from nantucket.......


Roses are red, violets are blue......


A preacher and a rabbi walk into a bar....




thats about all the poetry that I know.

katyon6th
11-15-2005, 12:56 PM
Def Poetry on HBO is badass.

KEDA
11-15-2005, 12:57 PM
Def Poetry on HBO is badass.


yeah, it would be better if I knew sign language! :lol

batman2883
11-15-2005, 12:57 PM
hell yeah i would love to make it on def poetry jam

Tres_Till_it_MHz
11-15-2005, 01:13 PM
Thats Slam Poetry, check it at Sams on Tues nites!

Mos Def and Jamie Kennedy are bad ass slam poets.

Check out some of Jamie's shit, definately hardcore poetry!

http://www.daniland.com/talent/jamie_kennedy/grim.mp3

http://www.daniland.com/talent/jamie_kennedy/brand.mp3

batman2883
11-15-2005, 01:15 PM
i loved when dave chapelle freaking mad fun of def poetry jam ha ha ha ha ha ha ha black people do this......white people do that...............

Dos
11-15-2005, 01:20 PM
I write.. but I don't think I'd have to will to go a slam poets nights..

sheesh poetry is everything you see.. much like design is everywhere you look..
I find it in the space around me.. in the subtle lines that draw and hold the
pictures of life together... thats where I find... in the moments I am drawn towards
heaven, but find I still have to exist here....

dos

pache100
11-15-2005, 01:21 PM
writing those poems make u look gay

That is NOT true...but saying that sorta does.

katyon6th
11-15-2005, 01:22 PM
If anyone watches Def Poetry on HBO, have you seen the Asian guy who flows about his medicore penis? It's fucking great.

PakiDan
11-15-2005, 01:48 PM
I stare at the moon
my eyes are like glowing bugs
glow glow glow
why does this hammer feel so heavy?

I weep into the cereal boxes
wrapped around my feet
I love you, blue Care Bear
Why do you scorn me with your pudgy paws?

This hammer is getting heavier
I think I will cry some more
glow glow glow - weep weep weep
OK - I'm done in here
you can have the bathroom

My bowels are empty - like my bottle.

A poem by PakiDan

katyon6th
11-15-2005, 01:49 PM
^ Most excellent.

Horry For 3!
11-15-2005, 02:18 PM
Fuck you bat. You can't write poems worth shit or flow. Don't talk down to me boy.

PakiDan
11-15-2005, 03:22 PM
Did you like my poem Horry?

Horry For 3!
11-15-2005, 04:22 PM
Did you like my poem Horry?
Its pretty good

Dr. Gonzo
12-27-2008, 01:47 AM
Fuck you bat. You can't write poems worth shit or flow. Don't talk down to me boy.

:lmao