I wanted to post 2 of my poems that I wrote. It is mostly for the ladies as one is called "My Girl" and the other "Love". I hope you enjoy them
My Girl
Look at that girl I see, she can take your heart easily
I knew she'd be mine, I could see that look in her eyes
I can't believe I'm with her now
Just look at all that happiness I have found
All the guys hate me now
Because I got the most beautiful girl around
Love
I walk among those fine lines, just so I could be by your side
I knew I crossed your mind, as I walked passed your sight
I wanted you to be with me, forever and for enternity
We finally found each other now, we'll stay in love until our life runs out
way, way up even!
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Those are nice. Good jobI like the "Love" one.
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Good job!
the Love one is my fav also.![]()
ThanksI'm surpised you like the Love one more because most like the My Girl one.
Excellent
I like the Love one best, too. Nice.![]()
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It is not a rap/flow, it a poem. The ladies like poems not flows![]()
My dog looks like a rat,
but he is cute as .
He likes to play tag,
but stands still when you yell.
He waits until your close,
and then runs like shat.
But when you catch and hold 'em,
he is the best dog in this land.
for you my love dog.
Horry for 3 - The poems are great and you are very talented. But they sound like something Tony would write about Eva. Good Job!
Yes, we get enough flows to last a life time. Or a least a good 30 years....so no, no flows.![]()
flows have to suck....
Horry Is A Pussy You Have To Realize That Besides He Can't Flow For , He Likes To Think He Can,
How is writing things that will get you pussy being a pussy? I thought that was you guys' main objective?
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I'm sorry but what horry wrote??? wouldnt get ing brad pitt pussy, girls would laugh at suck flotter....thats not poetry its like a 3rd grader rambling
Well, if you think that sucks...why don't you write something better? You know, show him how it's done....![]()
men journey far to seek true love,
i'm glad i know its true,
that i finally found you spurfect
my heart goes all to you,
for no other girl can take the place
of whom i love so true,
or that smile on your face that turns my grey sky's blue
your warm embrace is all i need to get me through my day,
and the tenderness of each great kiss is hard to turn away.
*coughing with hand over mouth "plagiarism" *
no its not copied from anything i put that on my sons life, i just came up with it
i just have to come up with an ending still thats not the end of it yet
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