Excellent Smithers...
So....the Express-News hooked me up as one of their "City bloggers".
Here's my first hack journalistic effort, it's Spurs related
http://voices.mysanantonio.com/peter...-start-to.html
Might do the next one on the big Spursreport/Spurstalk Civil War.
Remind me how this feud began.
Cheer up, Petey boy, from that opener, you can only get better.
Isn't sarcasm supposed to be funny?
Funny as and right on point...![]()
Embarrasing sounds about right...
loved it, Peter..absolutely priceless.
I thought the line about actually showing up to the game on time as opposed to the 2nd quarter was damn funny![]()
Good effort, look forward to the next one![]()
I figured I start the bar low, and try to work up.
Tanji Patton and her damn wine articles are killing it.
Somebody has hijacked the Spurs. hehe
Well done. I really liked your article about the grieving mother as well.
Seriously....In the pic above...Does Darth only have 4 fingers?
Nope...Fail Number 2. He has 5 fingers.
Google confirmed it.
Good thing you got that radio thing to fall back on.
sorry Mr. Burns he does have 4 fingers and 1 thumb![]()
Enjoyed it but who does the editing? Wrong puncutations and wrong sentence structure; here's a couple right at the beginning 1) Richard Jefferson is a young dynamic player this is an amazing scorer...should read 'that is an amazing scorer'; along with this sentence is supposed to end with a ? not at . "Do you honestly think Manu and Duncan can carry a scene without Bowen."
Mrcoon29, just saw it. Fixed it.
It was done under the influence of Chick-fil-a and Rum
Ok, but there's a few more if you're interested. I did enjoy reading it, btw.
Good job, Peter, keep it up.
Also, glad to see someone else giddy with Spurs' '09-'10 prospects.
It's one thing to have sarcasm interspersed throughout an article... it's another for it to be the entire focus. A couple good lines I suppose though.
Spurs before trade probably 8-1 to win 2009-2010 Championship.
With Trade probably 4-1
With Wallace/Varajeo Signing 5-2
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