Overall, when you shop an article around, it's never as a finished product. I don't have complete access to entire archives. Had a fact-checker discovered something wrong, it's an easy change since it wouldn't have been that off in the first place. Considering my qualifications, that I received an "A" on the piece in my CAPSTONE journalism class, and that I had a friend (former colleague) from the East Valley Tribune staff look it over, I think I'll take professional opinions on the article over those from someone who's always attacked me at every turn, simply because my definition if success (winning a le) doesn't match his (being the most popular team in the League).
Still, glad you read it.