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Nope, boring subplot, sorry.
You're not very good at this, are you?
That's ok, I'm sure blake can help you out.
Oh, hi old man!
Nice to see that I'm on your mind so much that you took the time to craft this long response after how many days.
Have you thought about my suggestions for your next storyline in the other thread? I'm personally leaning towards the terminal illness one, since that would be in line with your age. What do you think?
Nope, boring subplot, sorry.
You're not very good at this, are you?
That's ok, I'm sure blake can help you out.
All I really have is a rough outline, very rough.
Once that stage is done in your mind, I have to let it simmer and take shape.
Knowing you are BSing me, I am sort of taking your request with a grain of salt.
Just so you know, it would be very unwise to post plot lines etc, but I did let on to the MacGuffin.
Well, here are some other suggestions for things you can fake in a future storyline:
- fake Vietnam War deployment
- fake summer camp romance in your teenage years
- fake robbery in your home
- fake work crisis (argument with your boss or something)
Feel free to use any of them in your next meltdown. Just make sure to give credit where credit is due.
I am competent to create my own, thank you very much.
Yours, unfortunately, are rather juvenile and not very creative, no offense meant.
You're just not very good at this.
Sure, you say that now, but your past meltdowns really could have used better writing.
Still, you've got enough material already for a film series! Congrats! Here are some suggestions for film les:
Glen Hobart: Bleeding Out The Ass
Glen Hobart: Dead and Back Again
Glen Hobart: Interview With The Parody Account
Glen Hobart: The Screenplay
Again, I'm claiming credit if your screenplay uses any similar les.
Well, let's make sure you are grammatically correct first.
Your definition of "Melt downs" is incorrect, you are a bit confused.
You could be closer to the truth if you called them schticks, themes, subplots, fables, etc., but calling them melt downs just shows basic ignorance, sorry.
And film les?
I'm sorry to tell you but your terribly lame attempts at humor and creativity leaves a lot to be desired.
Thus why I keep telling you that you're not very good at this, i.e. keep your day job!
You see, that's a major problem I'm seeing in your writing. If you're going to construct a major screenplay, you need to come up with more than just a couple of lines and then reuse them ad nauseam.
Right there in your post above, you've reused riffs that you've been throwing out months ago. That's a sign of an uncreative mind and someone struggling for something to say.
I suggest a writers' workshop before even attempting to sell anyone on your screenplay.
So she took you back after embarrassing you out in public? How generous of her.
And "right there" you show how ignorant you truly are on this subject.
Those in the know, read the quote I am citing.
To coin a phrase I used a couple of weeks ago, the poster "knows not what he says".
If he did, he would never have posted such ignorance, even on a silly message board.
You take stuff on here waaaaaaaaaaaaaay too seriously, just like your bosom boyfriend chumpuss!
Man, these guys need to learn how to troll, Mouse.
You should give them lessons in creativity and humor in the worst way!
But then, they are the same posters who are deathly afraid to attend a GTG.
I'd love to see the look on the producer's face when xmas tries to sell them on "People Who Made Me Butthurt on SpursTalk: The Movie"
As I said, you belong to Avante, you are his .I'd love to see the look on the producer's face when xmas tries to sell them on "People Who Made Me Butthurt on SpursTalk: The Movie"
Ye he is and always has been, the little can't stand the fact I know all that stuff while he knows nothing, bugs the out of him, hahahaha!!!!!!!!! I once got a push in a football game, here he came....YOU LOST YOU LOST!!!!....hahahaha!!!!!! er so dumb he didn't get.... .5 .....then the dummy still tried to...IT'S STILL A LOSS....hahahaha!!!!!!!!!!! So hard up for me to lose, yep....he's ed up! He's freaking now because I;m winning, he lies in wait for me to lose, then here he'll come.....hahahahaha!!!!!!!! When I hit....crickets.As I said, you belong to Avante, you are his .
Notice the got does...0...here besides follow "us' around?
Him following me around is a bit new actually, he usually shadows you.
Do you notice who keeps shadowing me though, two of the biggest losers at ST?
I own them every time now, because they actually believe everything I say on here and think I am serious even though they can plainly see via the emoticons that I am constantly laughing at them.
Plus they have zero credibility and can only counter with the very lame accusation of "melting down", so much so that I question they even know what it means.
I love trolling those two, their egos are off the hoof.
shut the up gotHim following me around is a bit new actually, he usually shadows you.
Do you notice who keeps shadowing me though, two of the biggest losers at ST?
I own them every time now, because they actually believe everything I say on here and think I am serious even though they can plainly see via the emoticons that I am constantly laughing at them.
Plus they have zero credibility and can only counter with the very lame accusation of "melting down", so much so that I question they even know what it means.
I love trolling those two, their egos are off the hoof.
Oooh, look who has his panties all up in an uproar!
Look who is taking a silly message board all serious!
A little ribbing bothering you?
And what do you counter with, insults, cussing, and invectives?
How novel, creative, and mature of you!
ur a got and i hate youOooh, look who has his panties all up in an uproar!
Look who is taking a silly message board all serious!
A little ribbing bothering you?
And what do you counter with, insults, cussing, and invectives?
How novel, creative, and mature of you!
So what are you going to do about it, cry and whine on here?
Call me names of what you are hiding from in your deep seated subconscious?
Hate is pretty harsh tbqh, especially for a message board.
Why don't you go all postal over it?
Grow up.
you mean the guy who admitted to being a troll after you made so many claims about people who were trolls and you called him a decent poster but was i fact a troll, that guy?As I said, you belong to Avante, you are his .
You apparently did not read my "theater" thread where this was all explained in the original post.
I owe you a sincere apology as well for all the bashing I did to you, and for doing that, I am sorry.
Hope you won't hold any of it against me in the future, because it wasn't meant seriously, especially not in a message board forum.
From my apology forward I only ridicule those who first ridicule me, and will accord civility where it is due.
no you're not
No I'm not what?
Sorry for bashing you?
the post i quoted, it has a "be" verb so you're not the thing with the part that contains the "be"verb
As I said, this was all explained, all the schticks, trolling and otherwise, in my original post in the "theater" thread I posted.
So I am not in tune with what you are talking about.
But regardless of all that I wanted to be sure you got my apology where it applied to you personally.
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