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[spursballer21]

" tulips r red tulips r pink i love working with pen"different colored pens


"the smell of perfume" colored pencil on black paper
"1,2,3 shoot"blue bic pen
inspired by Juan Francisco Casas


Well here is my artwork.Tell me what you think about it.I love critics.And I'm bearly learning colored pencil and color if you all can give any tips tell me I'll listen to them.O and post up your art too I wana see what you all make too.I bearly have a year and half in art and this is what I've done and I'm bearly graduating high school senior .

[thispego]

bearly

[spursballer21]

bearly

bearly what?

[mookie2001]

bare grills?, thispego gets anxiety when he sees them

[fraga]

It's cute that you watermarked them...

[marini martini]

Very nice, SB!!! I can see a lot of improvement since you posted your art last time. Very creative!!!! Congratulations on winning first place on #3. I had to re-read that you did it with a blue bic pen!!! Keep up the good work!!!


..............and spell "bearly", barely next time!

[thispego]

kids about to graduate highschool and they cant even in spell. sad sad sad state of affairs.

yeah im not down with bare grills, but i am down with bear grylls

[JMarkJohns]

I like the third image quite a bit. I used to do a lot of pen/ink art in high school, and did a lot of stippling as well. A few years ago I got into wire art. That was a lot of fun.

As for critique, it's always tough to critique abstract. I would say spend more time on facial features, as yours are very simplified and cartoonish in appearance. Maybe that's intentional. Like I said, abstract is difficult to provide insight for. You seem to have good technique and color awareness, which is the two most important aspects beyond creativity. The only other note is you have three images and three distinct styles. Try to develop one and stick with it. If you get good, often times its that look that works to promote your art.

[thispego]

art, lol

[JMarkJohns]

art, lol

Lack of imagination/poor taste, lol

[lil'mo]

you can only have imagination if you like/make art. got it.

hey i'm impressed with people who can draw a persons face with perfect detail. but abstract etc, lol. please. babies can do that .

[spursballer21]

bearly

Very nice, SB!!! I can see a lot of improvement since you posted your art last time. Very creative!!!! Congratulations on winning first place on #3. I had to re-read that you did it with a blue bic pen!!! Keep up the good work!!!


..............and spell "bearly", barely next time!

Yeah, thanks thats what i was aiming for improvement.
How much better do you think i have gotten.
I think this is still the beginning of what i can and can do way better now that I have competion experience and watching other artists and most important learning from my mistakes.I think this is just the surface of my talent.

[spursballer21]

bearly

I like the third image quite a bit. I used to do a lot of pen/ink art in high school, and did a lot of stippling as well. A few years ago I got into wire art. That was a lot of fun.

As for critique, it's always tough to critique abstract. I would say spend more time on facial features, as yours are very simplified and cartoonish in appearance. Maybe that's intentional. Like I said, abstract is difficult to provide insight for. You seem to have good technique and color awareness, which is the two most important aspects beyond creativity. The only other note is you have three images and three distinct styles. Try to develop one and stick with it. If you get good, often times its that look that works to promote your art.

Thanks and its not abstract
its realism and surrealism
and well style
i dont have one
i think
im stick
with surrealism
and realism/realistic
those r the only styles that attract me

[marini martini]

Yeah, thanks thats what i was aiming for improvement.
How much better do you think i have gotten.
I think this is still the beginning of what i can and can do way better now that I have competion experience and watching other artists and most important learning from my mistakes.I think this is just the surface of my talent.

I think you have gotten a lot better. I can tell that you are a lot freer in your work, it looks to be that you are producing with more confidence and ease. Keep learning and familiarize your self with other artists' work as often as you can. In art there are never bad mistakes, only creative adjustments.

[JMarkJohns]

you can only have imagination if you like/make art. got it.

Don't be so sensitive that you take offense to me being an ass to someone else being an ass.

[spursballer21]

I think you have gotten a lot better. I can tell that you are a lot freer in your work, it looks to be that you are producing with more confidence and ease. Keep learning and familiarize your self with other artists' work as often as you can. In art there are never bad mistakes, only creative adjustments.

thanks and why more free?xD sorry again
thast what im aiming
for up up up and never lower
if u only knew my next ideas
they make this work
look like
xD
o well
im my worst critic
i love hearing
and know what other ppl thing of my progress and art
yeah i know there aint mistakes just creative adjustments
its a slow process
but hey
im getting there
i think i can show this world lots
im confident i could draw anything
excepts humans yet
its hard
to there shape
and realism
at the level i want
but ill get with practice

[Stringer_Bell]

brah, not bad looks promising, but you'd get better feedback if your replies weren't posted as ing poems that don't rhyme. kthanxbye

[lil'mo]

Don't be so sensitive that you take offense to me being an ass to someone else being an ass.

sorry, you're just so imaginative, liking art and all :LOL

[lil'mo]

thanks and why more free?xD sorry again
thast what im aiming
for up up up and never lower
if u only knew my next ideas
they make this work
look like
xD
o well
im my worst critic
i love hearing
and know what other ppl thing of my progress and art
yeah i know there aint mistakes just creative adjustments
its a slow process
but hey
im getting there
i think i can show this world lots
im confident i could draw anything
excepts humans yet
its hard
to there shape
and realism
at the level i want
but ill get with practice

lol, omg

[mouse]

Nice work you should enter this .........................

http://moca.virtual.museum/festival1...ntestindex.htm

[Mavs_man_41]

lil mo's extreme gotry is considered a work of art to some

[David Bowie]

you can only have imagination if you like/make art. got it.

hey i'm impressed with people who can draw a persons face with perfect detail. but abstract etc, lol. please. babies can do that .

That's bs. There is some really amazing abstract work out there. And you can always tell if somebody has talent or not just by looking at a few brush strokes.

[mouse]

That's bs. There is some really amazing abstract work out there. And you can always tell if somebody has talent or not just by looking at a few brush strokes.

mark Allen 1998

[spursballer21]

That's bs. There is some really amazing abstract work out there. And you can always tell if somebody has talent or not just by looking at a few brush strokes.

so u think i have talent or no?

Nice work you should enter this .........................

http://moca.virtual.museum/festival1...ntestindex.htm

well i really cant
its digital art
this is media art

and who cares if i write like that
its juts a forum

[mouse]

so u think i have talent or no?
well i really cant
its digital art
this is media art

Go to the main page they have free galleries and contest for all art, photography, and any images you can create with brush,pencil,charcoal,markers,chalk,ink,camera, or computer.

http://moca.virtual.museum/



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