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Avante, why do you keep writing poems for someone you don't like? I only write poems/songs for the girl I love, writing poems for the purpose of insulting someone is a profanity to poetry imho.
there he sits
looking goofy as can be
staring at a computer screen
thinking about me
he smells like a dirty sock
and day old
he then farts
takes a spit
he's listening to a rap band
drinking Ripple out of a tin can
a dumb look on his face
what a disgrace
poor little
dumb as a rock
the only time he gets excited
is when he's sucking
soon he'll come looking for me
I;m his hero
the guy he wishes
he could be
who'd want to be a lowly
benefactor
when you can be a cool
Avante
Last edited by Avante; 10-17-2014 at 11:15 PM.
Avante, why do you keep writing poems for someone you don't like? I only write poems/songs for the girl I love, writing poems for the purpose of insulting someone is a profanity to poetry imho.
Anytime I get someone where..I..become a major % of what they do here I have fun with it. I have 4-6 of these little freaks following me around to the point of I'm what they pretty much do here. So I stomp around on the little freaks, yep.....fun.
Like I mentioned before I can't write this stuff on demand, it just hits me. If I could I'd do a love poem. It's just not there right now.
I do like your stuff, you do sell the feelings.
There's the main man right there, a man among boys.
This is pure in gold.....
OP needs a pinking
rhyme scheme falls apart in the last stanza tbh
That coming from a guy who follows me everywhere I go, hahahaha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ok man here's the deal...
You stay away from me and I won't post any more threads here....deal? You don't do anything but leech ok so will I.
Something tells me if I gave you a brand new 100 dollar bill you'd about something.
Comparing your ty poetry to $100 shows just that you are completely out of touch with reality.
I've had my poems publized in school papers, read to college classes and in the local newspaper. Won contests.
You are that guy who reads a mile long list looking for misspelled words. You are a guy who needs to criticize others, it's who you are and it's obvious. You never have a nice word for anyone. You're just a little prick with a big mouth.
There's no accounting for taste. I only criticize those who need their egos checked. I don't respect people that lack humility. You are way too impressed with yourself.
So what do I need to do to get your approval?
Blake
You stop following me around and I'll stop posting threads...ok?
lol Trolls sprung on Benefactor!
You'll have to define "following you around"
You ignore me totally and I won't post any threads here until you do talk to me, deal? You do nothing here but leech off us, ok I can play that.
Avante, do you even consider the lines you write before posting them? It's like something a 5th grader would write. As much as you listen to music and lyrics, you'd think you would have a better grasp of iambic pentameter by now, and you even edited it.
Pretty sure anyone else here could write better than that on the 1st try, no editing, just improv.
Nah no deal.
I'll just continue to up my efforts to get you pinked.
Well, go ahead and prove your point.
Why do you worry soooooooooooooooooo damn much about me? I've never got why you are SOOOOOOOOOOOOOO damn worried about....me? It's gone beyond silly internet . Blake what really is the problem, real talk here...ok?
Why do you worry so much about posters that you start multiple butthurt threads about us?
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