that has to be sum gooood you got man....nice poem.![]()
What would you see if you animate my mind?
Cowboy clad monkeys dancing intertwined
The Moon grabs his balls and flips off the sun
A platypus spanking the ass of a nun
Drunk elderly people riding on ponies
A mighty army of marching macaronis
Frogs standing around eating bagels and cheese
A donkey swimming in a pool of green peas
Ninjas and Pipers slow dancing all night
To the sounds of Air Supply and Mr. Barry White
A bumblebee reading a book upside down
Hobos and fairies competing for a crown
Faces have nipples and nipples have faces
A goldfish runs ‘way while a tomato chases
Jesus and Burt Reynolds playing funny jokes
Putting Peter’s pee-pee in everyone's Cokes
Ashtrays handing out books that they had signed
This is what you would if you could animate my mind
that has to be sum gooood you got man....nice poem.![]()
I like it![]()
was this written with a sober mind
Actually yes. It was written in 2000 when I was on probation.
lol. i believe in the saying that if you stayed ed up for long enough, it becomes your "sober" state of mind, and when you're sober, thats when you're " ed up" and your mind starts doing weird stuff.
i can attest to this.![]()
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Like they say in rehab...You can get a lot higher without drugs than with them.
I do know. I spent 3 months in rehab.
i spent 7 years on weed and alcohol.
i mostly had to learn on my own, but therapy every sunday you know.
then i finally snapped. for the good.![]()
kinda wierd, but you know how to make poems
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Last edited by bigzak25; 11-27-2005 at 01:46 AM.
Post that on poetry.com and you could find it in a nice hard bound book of poems!
I've done that already and it is bound it a book. Too bad I'm not paid for it.
Here's one I've got on poetry.com.
Still the Same
Time passes by and the emptiness stands still.
False hopes consume my blind eyes.
My heart too familiar with the stranger.
The paths I walk welcome my every step.
Everywhere I look my dreams come alive.
Reminders of my desire cannot escape.
Every passing ship carries a heavy load.
So another day ends and leaves with a wink.
Another bad taste in the mouth of a loser.
~~J. Sauceda
I have one that was published as an "honorable mention" once, too. And I was never paid for it.
nice
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