I climbed out of
that old Greyhound
in some little
run down town
I'd gone as far
as I could go
yep, I was busted
totally out of dough
so there I stood
my suitcase in my hand
looking like what I was
a lost and lonely man
then she pulled up
in a long black Cadillac
she smiled
so I had to grin
then she said
hop on in
so I tossed my suitcase
in the backseat
then she said
you need a drink
something to eat
so we headed
to her place
it was over a few hills
as we listened to the stereo
it was some vintage Bob Wills
she lived in a trailor
had a big black cat
now I'm thinking
where in the
am I at
the next morning
I unpacked my suitcase
put my things away
she'd made it very clear
I was there to stay
if there is a morale
to this little story
I guess it must be
sometimes it's better
not to know
your destiny
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"Gay"
bobcat was little
around 5 foot 3
he had a tiny
and was as gay
as could be
he liked to hang
in alleys and
dead end streets
places where perverts
and freaks liked to meet
bobcat sucked anyone he could
uptown
downtown
over in the hood
it didn't matter to him
if they were short
fat tall or thin
a real sucker
down on his knees
that was our bobcat
always looking to please
Last edited by Avante; 08-07-2014 at 01:52 AM.
Didn't mean to hurt your feelings Avante, was just being an honest critic.
A guy ending up with a strange lady.......is gay?
Thought this was about the new kick ass video game coming out.![]()
"Video Game"
there we sat
paddle in hand
I was winning
I'm a bad bad man
I'd scored a hit
I knew how to play
my buddy just sat there
what could he say
I broke the record
most hits in a game
I should be in the
video game
Hall of Fame
Not bad.
"paddle"
old bas
If the strange lady has a penis and s the guy in the ass...yes, it's pretty gay
"Strange Lady"
she was tall
about 7 feet two
had long blonde hair
eyes were blue
she was a strange lady
this was well known
when she wasn't drinkin' whiskey
she was talking on the phone
I met her at a bar
a little kicker place
I was dressed in leather
she was wearing lace
we ended up
in the back seat of my car
back there with an amp
and my old guitar
at 7 feet two
it wasn't easy
actually it was
hard to do
but we got her done
and she was great
if I can come up with some money
I might ask her for a date
"DMC'
he lived in a trailor
out in the sticks
had an old bulldog
just full of ticks
he had no friends
other than that bulldog
a turkey
and a few hens
he was sorta backward
as all could see
would wear a t-shirt
that read
I'M DMC
he was a cherry boy
some said he was gay
but it really didn't matter
he liked it that way
the boy liked to
bother Avante
that's how he got his nut
yep, acting stupid
while sitting on his butt
Last edited by Avante; 08-08-2014 at 01:50 AM.
Hey Avante, rate my latest poem please...
http://www.spurstalk.com/forums/show...69#post7545469
Personally I'm not a fan of the dual verse, just say it once. Other than that....B.
Go back and look at that solid A poem of yours, that first one. You seem to be getting a little too...ah...mushy?
thanks for your advice, bro![]()
I derived the poem from the lyric of a Scarlett song (Innocent when you dream). It may sound fine but it did look redundant for a poem, I'm gonna edit it. Thank you again for your excellent advice.
"Old got"
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Underage Gook Tranny With A
Philippine bar, I was having a drink
All around, were underage s
They were all very pretty, but all dressed like s
It made me quite sad so I drank a bunch more
Through the front door walked this fat GI man
Fly was unzipped, had cash in his hand
Drunk as a skunk, old Cooter Brown
Asking the teens if they liked to go down
I was about to serve him one mean dragon kick
But then he approached a gook with a prick
I held back my kick and decided to watch
As this fat drunk GI rubbed the tranny thing's crotch
The GI slobbered and panted and came
The tranny smiled and then did the same
"you give me money and I say no crime
I'm only 14 but me love you long time"
I must admit, I did not interfere
I sat and laughed and drank some more beer
They were quite the couple this GI was sick
with the underage gook tranny with a
Is this how you met Judy
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