Oh. Well maybe the was one of the other 4 of the Avante Group and this one failed to take notice.
I still like the effort.
Avante has bragged about being a bad ass writer.
Oh. Well maybe the was one of the other 4 of the Avante Group and this one failed to take notice.
I still like the effort.
the cadence was terrible
abysmal would work
is dat what you say
Yadamn Fckn jerk?
And I'm horrible at this stuff...
but then again
Why even add the above? He's got a good thing going the first two and out of nowhere, failure.
It throws a simple cadence way out of wack.
Please stop.
If I have to edit this stuff, God help you.
And I just edited my edit to drive the point home, ouch.
Last edited by pgardn; 03-02-2018 at 12:55 AM.
You know you left yourself wide open on this.
Dude, I'm slow, fat, stupid, bad teeth, bow legged, pot belly, tiny , moronic, an idiot, have zits, losing my hair, can't dance, suck at every single thing I have ever done and will totally suck at everything I will ever do.
Better?
Dude, why ya try sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooo damn hard to belittle everyone is ing weird. You come off as a total asshole, ok?
Oh another meltdown. No way didn't see it coming
I did not know you had bad teeth?
Dude, I'm all ed up, the three teeth I have are rotten. Now add 389 pounds of goo. I never ran track, played football, ....just a fat . I Google everything, without my Google....DUH~~~~~~~
I thought about FINALLY reading a book but too damn lazy to go buy one.
Yep, couldn't fool you, you saw right thru my bull .
, I'm still a cherry boy.
Last edited by Avante; 03-03-2018 at 03:20 AM.
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